All Comments on 'Firsts Ch. 06'

2/5.

Hand on good editing is essential.

I've been checking back for a while now. Can't wait for the rest!

that couldn't possibly be the end!

What a wonderful little twist with Melosa needing help. I already have my own fantasy going with her and Matt -- not poor Rico, who needs his own story when he grows up and cleans up! Keep up the good work. More. More. More! ha ha

Give Kes and Gabriel a happy ending, make it steamy and give it to us soon, I can't wait to see how this story plays out. Then give us a bit of follow up when you write sequels for Kes' brothers or Melosa or Rico. You've built a great set of characters in this story, it would be a shame to let them go unexplored.

I really like this chapter. I wonder what Mateo really thinks of Melosa hmm... and I have a feeling that at least one of Kes' brothers' suspect their relationship. I can't wait for the next chapter so update as soon as possible..:-)

I almost don't want the next chapter to be the last! There's SO much more that could be written about!! You are an amazing writer! Cannot wait for the next chap!!!

This story is awesome, Kes and her brothers are awesome, and of course Gabriel is beyond awesome. But then you knew that already didn't ya? lol. Cannot wait for the last one, as bittersweet as that will be, or for the rest of the stories floating around in that talented head of yours!

I'm afraid I'm going to have to begin protesting now... Unless it's a really really long chapter, there's no way just ONE more will suffice! We need more! More Kes and more Gabriel! And her brothers, too. There are too many loose ends to finish in one chapter - too much story left to tell for all of them. Say it's not so!

What I meant to say was that this is a lovely story and I hate to see it ending too soon. You've done a lovely job and I can't wait to read more... LOTS more. Thanks for sharing :)

I really love this story . You should post more and soon :D

take care xoxox

I cannot wait for the next update!