All Comments on 'Fists of Repentance Ch. 02'

Yes, I know this is fiction, but this infuriates me. I think I'd be inclined to try my baseball batting skills if I'd gone as far as stalking!

I like writers who think a little differently then the majority. I like this story line and I hope she ends up with a lot of sexual gratification, and likes it!!

Don't know about a stardog, but my wolfhound could write a more interesting tale BORING

Why would you want to add any more to this Piece of CRAP?

We want Britney to keep eating her pussy while her boyfriend fucks her uptight ass....

be a fairly good writer,but now it seems that you have joined the bunch of moronic so called writers that

are apparantly taking over what used to be a good site.

did your mommie put you on the potty backward? Is this why you hate women so much? What crap.

I cannot understand why a) this author is so damned reluctant to let an editor improve his writing, and b) why people who don't appreciate proper English criticize those of us who do. I can be very specific about what I don't like here: there are sentences that go on waaay too long. They twist and turn and generally leave me reading them a couple of times to understand all the references. Flame me if you want, but this is POORLY-WRITTEN!

..there's no way anything I could ever write that would be more entertaining than some of your pathetic, rambling diatribes!!

If I didnt like a meal I got from a certain restaurant, the last thing I'd do would ever be going back there...especially the very next day. The way some people have found the time to read part 2 with the same distaste as they did part 1 just baffles me..There are what like 100,000 stories on the site here and you feel compelled to read mine....Gee..I'm blushing:) By the way parts 3 and 4 will just take the storyline even further down into the gutter....

And thanks again for clicking on the stories and adding to my read count..its approaching 2 million now over the 8 years or so I've been priviliged to post here...

Peace, Stardog

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stories, they are compelled to critique them so you can improve and become an author. It is obvious from your two responses, this segment and the previous one, that you write so poorly and with such warped plots just to get the people writers write for, the readers, to hate what you do and critique you for your own warped amusement. You are right when you eat rotten food you should not go back to the same place to eat. So from now on we wont read your work, just come in give it a 0 and go read better works. At least your ego can swell from all of the people who flame you.

As was the case with the first episode, this really needs the attention of an editor. As far as the tale itself goes, it's reasonably entertaining; enough so to carry on to the next chapter.

This contines to set new lows for a writer who relishes helplessness and absurdities. Is he so weak and failure ridden that this excites him.<P>

Hardly arousing or erotic except to those few who like the writer need sick sub treatment.

Sensuouse,violent erotic sex,what more can I say.

I lasted half way through your pile of dung. I hope the author is not as sick as his story is.

the Ct. Yankee

I love the way you describe Leslie's confusion and spiral down that slippery slope of depravity.