All Comments on 'Fitness Contest'

Incredibly hot stuff! Excuse me, it's time to change panties.

Your story has been mentioned by this guest reviewer in the New Story Reveiw thread in the Author's Hangout on the bulletin board.

even if it isn't in that category. A very hot story, but one where the author's knowledge shown through. I always love a story where I think I've learned something and met interesting characters.

so hot... well written. and confirms my partner's observation that sex is better when I work out regularly ;=)

That was so very hot curl4ever that reminds me of the 1960`s when i would watch arnold swartenager on tv on the sport program i hope to read the next chapter keep up the great writing ok.by the way im 54 and john is great and mary is tremendous

Pat Murray

Not at all what I expected. I normally read stories posted here with low expectations, but you have left me hungering for more. AND I HATE WORKING OUT - LOL

Thanks so much for this HOT story! Descriptions of the fitness aspects of the story were spot on! Loved it!!

What incredibly shallow, superficial, narcissistic people. Not erotic.

I'm actually shocked that you received any negative feedback for this story. I guess some people just want to get off in 3 minutes or they aren't satisfied.

I love your style of writing - a lot of details that so many authors would skip, leave out, or never think of. For example the other competitors each had their own separate looks and identities. If this is not based on a true story, it has enough details to have made me think otherwise.

I will admit the action was a little short once you got down to it, but the sex was good. I just feel like you could have spent more time during each sex scene.

The only thing that would make this story hotter (maybe just my own personal opinion) is a couple of things that I sort of thought would fit well into the story... like perhaps they get caught having sex during one of their sessions or perhaps Mary gets blackmailed by one of the judges and is forced to have sex in order for him to do well. Perhaps I'm just sick in the head and those are my own fantasies though =P.

It was a good love story though and I will be checking out your other stories if you have some. (considering the quality of this I would be shocked if you didn't.)

By the way, longest review I have ever written. =)

Very well written, a husband and wife that are together in every sense of the word. A very highlighted read regarding the specialized triathlon with excellent erotic activities thrown in.

BRAVO!!

Any chance of more please sir

Next chapter could be the two of them training together for a competition but with her showing huuuge improvement.

I would too love a second chapter