by CaringAndDemanding
Five stars. I enjoyed the story and the progression of Dalia to slutdom. Your detail in the scenes is excellent. It struck all the right chords with me.
Wow..I really enjoyed this.........5 stars from me.
Thanks for the story!
"Buckeye Fan"
That was so hot and I'm not even into that scene but reading it made me hot and bothered. I'm am a bit submissive and so it triggered something and now I'm obsessed with the "Mike" character. Thank you so much for a wonderful read. I will have to read your other stories.
Excellent story, believable characters. Only criticism I have is the ending felt rushed-- it came too fast and was a little cliche. But maybe I am just jaded. Anyway, looking forward to your next one.
One small name up cock but otherwise a well thought out and executed story. Conclusion maybe left a little open but still good. 5⛤
AROUSING. Pushed my buttons. Loved the ALPHA MALE. Very creative storyline. Good characterization. Just plain ENTERTAINING. Surprising ending. Did not see that coming ! 5 STARS