All Comments on 'Five Rules Ch. 03'

I loved this..and the previous Five Dates, my only curiosity is why it has been posted in Non con..when it is D/s? thoroughly relished being a part of her journey and His...and appreciated this follow up and knowing that she found One that could understand her needs..and give her a path to follow...thank You

You're right about my categorizing this story. I made the choice because Five Dates is definitely Noncon, but after finalizing my choice I realized that BDSM would be a better fit. I'll leave it as it is, and I'm okay with getting a lower score than I might have gotten in BDSM.

Also, thank you. I'm glad you found something of value in my story.

Ohh no...I was just being nosey...definitely not a lower score...reading more of Yours now..Thank You again

I thoroughly enjoyed reading her journey and His. Hopefully they will pop up in other stories ....just as a mention.

Thanks. I haven't thought about dropping older characters in new stories, but I might someday.

This series of stories was amazing. Gave me the courage I needed to talk to my own Sir about making our dynamic more strict. I love how Matt isn't a robot Dom, but instead has feelings and dwells on the past sometimes like a real human.

I am certainly outside the Lifestyle of the people in the story, and I realize this is only a story, but really, he should not gone out leaving her tied to a machine doing those things to her. My understanding is that the FIRST responsibility of a Dom to the sub is the sub's safety. There could have been a lightening strike, a power surge, a malfunction in the machine. Possibility of a house fire. She could have gone into an emotional breakdown or be stricken by some sort of illness. And there she is…helpless. Matt is guilty of a major transgression of the rules and customs of the Lifestyle (of which there seem to be many). He even lacks common sense outside the Lifestyle. And the story has a significant flaw therein.

A good story, thoroughly readable.