All Comments on 'Five Trailers, Lot A'

Another smile to start the day. Thanks *****

If it had been set in Metairie Lawn

not much at writing comments- just say you keep writing and I will keep reading thanks for good read. jdc

I love your stories and being from Louisiana I would love to see you include Avoyelles Parish in a story. Thanks again.

Thanks for sharing!

Is Mindy from another story, the name sounds familiar.

your grammar needs work. enjoyed your story, would have been better suited in the romance section. let,s see another story with the same characters later in life.

Loved the story, please write more for me :)

Thanks, Rachel

You excelled there. Guidry was fun, too.

Great, erotic story. I don’t see how anybody could comment about Trump after reading this. I just wanted to read more about Mindy’s butt!

I love how you built each characters. The end is sweet and i feel like i want to know what will happen to them. The sexy parts felt more sensual . A really good read.

I love your stories, especially the characters and dialog. Thank you for taking the time to write them. It is appreciated.

If he thinks he can go into the Military to duck is responsibility/garnishment think again - DoD has no tolerance for dead-beat spouses. And now it is even worse as he will live under TWO sets of LAWS, UCMJ & Local/State!

Charlene is actually his dependent getting full DoD Medical and and dependent allotment, w/her own orange dependent ID card. Since Mindy was never married to him - she gets nothing other than the funds for their daughter. Unless Clarence gives up his rights to Charlene and someone adopts her - he is stuck paying the bill for one night of fun. You dip it - you pay for it, 18-22yrs.

Looks like Clarence is taking his first step in becoming a real man. Hooyah!

Great story with some interesting characters! I was glad Mindy and George ended up happy together.

Your characterizations are excellent.

Thanks for sharing your work!

Just started reading this series, great characters and good story. Looking forward to reading more. Oh, last time I was in Metairie, I ate at a place called Bud"s Broiler but I don't need a story about it, don't know if it still exists :-D