All Comments on 'Fixer-Upper'

Slow to start but got rocking at the last.

Unusual, but a good tale.

I must say; once it got going it REALLY got intense. Throwing in the part about the Glory Hole was an act of genius. I had a little trouble with the phrases that used the terms "next store" rather than "next door" ~ but if you liked it then I'm happy with it. Face it; you're a good writer with a nice ability to "thrill" me. Thanks. Ron

Encore!! Bravo!! Magnifico!! Absolute Perfection!! Fixer Uppers are the devil!! Have fun in them while you can!

... with lots of nuances and an attention to mundane details that bring an air of reality to the tale and life to the characters. I firmly believe that "erotic" is as much mental as it is physical, and you get inside the mind of your main character - and your readers. You're a gifted writer, FnS! AverageBear from Canada

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

Real erotic fiction - the buildup is unbearably tense, and the final release is all the more satisfying for the attention to character.

Love it Omg didn't want it to end I give this a 10 star not 5 lol

This is the best story I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story, I really enjoyed this one a great deal!

Enjoyed your story very much. However, since it seemed obvious from the start that our heroine was going to end up doing the 2 college students, some of the story in the center could have either been shortened or eliminated. But a nice satisfying outcome.

Really, maybe it was my mental state, but the last fuck scene I could feel it all, the storm, the bodies...

Really nice evocation. Pretty good story, liked the depth of her character.

Well done. I enjoyed this one. Her uncertainty and her reluctance kind of led up to the finally.