All Comments on 'Fixing Her'

no incest =fail

no background = fail

no character development=fail

blackmail = double fail

as is a waste of time IF you continue and need to add rape or other shit use the NONCONSENT AREA THAT IS WHAT IT IS FOR.

Someone PLEASE call the trash collector. We have a HUGE pile of steaming crap to haul away.

This barely qualify's as a three minute

conversation in a therapists office.

Wheres the story?

What the fuck is this shit?

It amazes me to no end that Lit allows garbage to infest this site like this.

Take your shit to Lush Stories. Everyone rates stories at a 4 or 5 and go, "Rah, rah, rah. That was a great story." Even if it sucks shit like this one.

A great turgid pile of steaming crap, you can't write, and you have no story to tell, go away and find another way to masturbate in public, this is a fail, big time

what?

Trolled

WAS THAT CRAP made no sense at all

....oh Lord, where DO we start?

seriously

A story should have a beginning, middle and and end. You skipped a few steps.

This is Fucking shit