by firebird68
Now that he has had a Taste he can go to the Party and Piss his Buddies off by taking his Pick of the Best.
Am I remembering wrong, or did he go from Josh in Ch 1 to John this chapter
To all readers, whether you have or have not noticed, there is a editing error with the name of the male character, from chapter 1 to chapter 2 in this story. I just want to apologize for this mistake formally and let you guys know it wont happen again. I truly can't believe I missed such a stupid error. So, once again, I apologize for the mistake. Chapter 3 will be out soon and the character's name will be John in it, plus in future chapters. Thank you for your understanding.
-firebird68
I really like you writing style but there were a couple of really impractical elements of this part of the story that the story hinged on that made it unbelievable. My enjoyment of it fell off too much to be recoverable.
Keep at it though!
X-Man