All Comments on 'Flashes in the Dark - Rebecca'

i love when i read about heather please keep it going

'"We're lesbians in a Literotica story. We should be having sex at first sight." Heather pointed out. "It's a miracle we haven't started making out yet."'

So much for the 4th wall!

On a more serious note - loved this piece. As much á Heather claims to be a lost cause, her humanity shines through quite brightly here; very touching.

I'm following the development of Heather's character with great interest. I like where LaRascasse is taking her in these various vignettes. It will be interesting to see where she goes. Oh, and of course, well-written as usual. Always a pleasure to read.

A wonderful and well written story!

You are so good, thank you for all of your writings!

L

To be honest the sex became less interesting to me the more the story developed; please take this as a compliment. I found the character development completely intriguing and very clever. I loved this story and think you are very talented. K.

I will use this paragraph you have written

If you want goodness, look at the other end of the spectrum. Look at underpaid teachers and social workers. Look at doctors in inner city clinics. Look at the patrol cops or the firemen down the street who risk their lives for complete strangers. Look at the Good Samaritan who gives a homeless guy a twenty for a meal. Look at the teenager who helps an old lady across the road. Look at the everyday acts of kindness all around you, but for God's sake, don't look at the top

Unfortunately the greediness has reached the lowest parts as well as the highest of our societies and money buys everything - this was Heather Franklin’s truth ….. yes there are some highlights but after all no difference anymore ….. its not just my minds thought, many others having the same conclusion

We all start with childish thoughts of making the world a little better and then the first temptation is perhaps enough and the dark power casts its spell over us .... We are all sinners, without exception, even the so called holy ones or good ones or name it

You are just writing about a depressive truth the human s have reached

Thank you for sharing your talent ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨☘️