All Comments on 'Flatmates'

I liked the story, I hope you write more.

Good premise.

Still need an editor/proofreader.

Why did the story end before he put his tongue to proper use?

Needed details of his tongue on her pussy.

Why didn't she have him lick her asshole?

Why didn't she involve other parts of her body? Her breasts? They could have been used to tease him. She could have promised him he could kiss and suck them if he gave her a good orgasm or two. Would he like that?

Four stars.