All Comments on 'Flavoring Chocolate Peach Ch. 02'

I actually find your writing style refreshing, and very different, from that of most other writers on this fine site. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to a continuation of this story! =)

Man I am so so glad to see some recent "Black erotic stories" on this site. Your story is good but can use a lil more spice and sex in it. Like Darius fucking Lillian while hubby is in close proximity not knowing wifey is getting boned, ya know something along those lines, now that's spicey!!! Anyway keep doing your thing like I said your story is good but can potentially be great!!! Also don't keep us waiting so long for future stories!!