by WonderlandFantasy
I'd say this is a pretty good first story, I totally enjoyed it, and can't wait to read the next thing you write! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Keep it up. I'd like to see a part two. You know, those flight attendants have to stay overnight a lot.. Maybe they go to the same hotel and get to know each other? That would require a lot more detail, but would be a great time to work into a longer chapter.. again, great story.