by StewardessMasturbationFantasy
I would love to catch one of your sexy displays sometime.
I bet that you would be up for this! I would love to take you for a long drive on an expressway, with your back leaned up against me and my arm over your right shoulder and with my hand I would tease and masturbate your sweet very wet love canal as we slowly pass by trucker after trucker.
It's hard to read this story because it jumps so much. You need an editor to go through it and make it more readable.
I do agree that it jumps but I get why she does it in order to tie different and progressive exhibitionist events. I would write it differently too but love this story!
but a jumble of ideas. You have enough material for a half a dozen stories. An editor could be a help.