by BillAdams
I hardly ever read stories that long all the way through, but I really related to the characters and loved every word. Thank you for a great read.
Writing was OK, but took too long to get to the sex. The visual of a middle aged man wasn't too good either.
This is, by far, one of the best written stories on this set. Someone else commented that it took too long to get to the sex, but I would have to disagree. Usually I am not one who likes a long build up, but you wrote the story so well that it kept me intrigued until we got to the sex which made it all the more erotic for me. I could easily picture myself in the story, in fact Bill reminds me a whole lot of myself. Good job.
Great writing and a great fantasy. I've been flying a lot for work, but spread out among six airlines. I always end up back in cattle class.
I've never had the chance to meet a Lori, it's still a hot fantasy.
Great story and so real! A long time fantasy of my own and I could almost feel like Bill and enjoy all that he was enjoying! Five stars *****
A very believable and well written story. A story that warms an old man's heart and
reminds me that not every thought or action between a man and a woman need be
sexually related, but it sure is a nice way to pass some of life's more boring moments.
Thanks.
I have been scrupulously faithful to my wife of almost 40 years, and would like to think that I would always remain so.....but.....I have never been tested as described in this story. Under such circumstances, who knows. Very thought provoking tale.