All Comments on 'Flight Emergency Ch. 02'

So the whole story wasnt about sex.(Or at least, this chapter) That was a pleasant change of pace. I liked it alot, it was well written.

Good stuff.

Wonderfully written! I would love to read Micha's story!

I read both chapters at this sitting and find each, and both, to be well-written and thoroughly engaging.

-- KK in Texas

As I sit here bawling I want to congratulate the author on writing this story. I will look at your others in the near future....

Great story with a superb conclusion. Couldn't have been done any better with kudos to the unusual twist of the biological grand parents opting out of any type of legal claims.

Truly an excellent peice of writing.

You deserve a triple 5 for this story.

The RAAF haven't had red, white and blue roundels in decades.

Okay story, but where's the eros?

I'm glad you added chapter two, I'm especially glad you made it a chapter and not an epilogue. Now I have to check out the other stories you've posted.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

I absolutely loved it. Was one of the best I have ever read on here. THANK YOU

I don't think this story was well-written at all. While the plot was good, the writing was fair at best. And it wasn't just the grammatical errors that were the problem. Also, it was difficult to follow some of the dialogue because most of it did not specify who was actually talking.

I wonder why those that criticize an author nearly always remain anonymous? Probably they are not capable to write stories and can only carp about others. Fess up anonymous! What is your real problem?

I have to agree.......If you want to be critical, put your name on it. This was a fun story. I enjoyed it.

This whole story was extremely well done. Sure there may be the odd spelling or gramatical error but who cares, the story has been told and told well!!!!

All of your stories have dragged me into the middle of them, I was riding the emotional rollercoaster as the story unfolded to an end that had tears in my eyes. Just keep your stories coming and don't worry about the idiots who wouldn't know a good story if it bit them on the arse

The rest of this was fluff to get there IMHO -

The ex was nuts -

He was the father of record and unless Australia is markedly different than the states that does carry weight. So it ended as it should -

Thank you for sharing with us -

He may not have been Micha's father,but he was her daddy.Any male may father a child, that don't make him a daddy.That's more a matter of heart than biology.

a follow on story was not necessary but you went beyond the call of duty to extend it in a most enjoyable reading

I am glad to see a nice wrap up to this story!

This was a nice follow up on the first story. Just one question: You begin telling the story in first person, then somewhere in the middle you change to third person and then near the end you are back in first person again. Why so?

Loved the whole story! Thanks!

There is a follow up story about Micha, who wrote it?

To Anonymous. If you are referring to 'That Summer With Kate', it was written by me. (Cromagnonman).