All Comments on 'Flight Fantasy Ch. 01'

Need to get your basic facts right:

Sidney is actually: SYDNEY

QANTAS

Plus, Qantas does not fly Taiwan to LA

Needs some serious work on all fronts

hey anonymous in OZ...

i actually thought it was a well thought out story line ... in regards to the final outcome

I do want you to know anonymous in oz that if you are going to be so pedantic about small details ... you have way to much time on your hands or you need to get a life ... better still find another site

do the author a big favour anonymous in oz ... grow up ... get an imagination and stop your whingeing

better still submit a better story if you can ... or if you dare big mouth.

ANONYMOUS IN NZ.

and to you callmejack ... keep up the good work ... I am looking forward to what happens in your next submission.

GOOD LUCK and don't listen to the ding bat in oz

Liked it very much, and although I also noticed the miss-spelling of both Sydney and Quantas, I - as a non-Australian - don't take it to heart. The rest doesn't need much work, it is a good story, well written, has characters, character development and sex too.

Please continue it for us!

John

What's with all the comments about spelling and geography errors?? You sound like the patron in a whore house noting the piano players off key, lol. Get a life!

......struggling to find the connection with the category it has been submitted to

Hey, just read the other comments.

No doubt if I wrote a story about Now York and Amirecan Airlines, I'd be getting negative comments too and rightly so.

The idea of feedback is to take it onboard and do better next time, not take it to heart and react like a 5th grader.