All Comments on 'Flight Moves'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Witty!

Jolly good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hmm

Good, if unbelievable.

Slightly spoiled by typos. Check your work!

"We were well on our way to paradise when her blonde colleague peaked an eye through the curtain."

Ever come across the English word "peek"? Makes more sense in this context than "peak".

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