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All Comments on 'Flight of Desperation Ch. 01'

by ashandjo

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Phantom1945Phantom1945over 11 years ago
Get an editor!

Your grammar is so atrocious as to completely distract a reader. Phrases such as "had went" and "wouldn't of" don't belong in anyone's prose, except as dialogue designed to indicate an uneducated bumpkin. Please clean up your writing or stop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Unreadable!

100% unreadable! (See previous comment)

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