by kittenkiss
This was one of the best erotic lesbian stories i've read all year. Loved the way Rhianne would whisper those sweet and naughty words into her ear. Also enjoyed the mild D/s theme.
Do you have other texts you are willing to share?
Excellent first offering, I hope you treat us to some more!
That was really, really good.
P'lease keep writing...can't wait to see what you've got to offer next :)
I really enjoyed your story. As I was reading it, I almost felt that I was watching the scene as it unfolded. I think you did a great job expressing the wanton needs of the main character. Great job. Keep writing.