All Comments on 'Flight Plan'

Hopefully you'll get some editing for this otherwise fun story. The "plan" isn't what they'll escort you off of as easily as the "plane", and "trimmers" will cut but not likely be as fun as "tremors," "She worn a light weight silk blouse" -- really? how about "wore" instead? :) There's several other spots like these, and places where you've got lot's of extra words that don't help the story. A couple of rounds of editing will likely make this a crisp exciting read.