All Comments on 'Flight to Submission Ch. 16'

I was worried you'd given up on this one. I was so excited to see that is not the case! 5 stars!

Then shrink this down to 4 or 5 chapters that are both readable and entertaining. Then you might have something worthwhile.

Its nice to see you writing again .We thought we had lost you girl .

Good to see other fans missed you as much as I did, always such class in your stories, looking forward to chapter 17, 5 stars.

Loved it. Oh my wishes.

Wonderful chapter and great writing. This is an amazing story and you my friend are a wonderful writer.

I am happy to see you back writing again. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Anyone not enjoying this writer, or her stories needs to look elsewhere for their reading material.

Thanks

Tom

Great story,well put together.Thank you ,waiting on the next chapters.