All Comments on 'Floin's Adventures of the Flesh Ch. 04'

Hi! I loved the story. It is exceptionally well written with well developed language, plot and writing style. I found the tension of the anticipated violent execution which then gave way to public sexual humiliation to be deliciously exciting. I can't wait for part 5 of Floin, and are eagerly working through the other stories.

Would love authors feedback on my own stories.