All Comments on 'Florida Whore: Daisy Makes Them Men'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
keep writing

well written, short, but detailed

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
VERY GOOD

Keep up the good work !! I have been reading porn for over 50 years and yours is one of the best stories that I have read, looking forward to more. thank you

coyote_runningcoyote_runningover 8 years ago
Good job.

There were a couple of small errors. Not sure if you have someone proof read these but you should. Again, I enjoy the pacing and build up. You have a very good writing style. Keeping writing and posting please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nice one

If I had a girl like Daisy, no way I'd let her be a whore

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