All Comments on 'Flower Ch. 02'

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FloribundaFloribundaover 8 years ago
Such a beautiful story, so far, for such a sad one

I sincerely hope that Rose will find her beautiful life ahead.

Just want to say that I am loving this collage of stories between four friends. Different people have different stories, but they can all be soul friends. xx

SomeSayLoveSomeSayLoveover 8 years agoAuthor
There's a light in this dark tunnel as well...

I felt I had made this story a little too dark for a little too long, but I promise, we'll soon be getting to the good parts :)

I wanted to tell a story about domestic violence in all of its different flavors, from minor verbal abuse to fullscale physical abuse, to perhaps open some eyes or help in some way by highlighting that abuse is abuse, whether it "just" hurts you on the inside or if you have marks to prove it. But I got stuck in the stories around the main message, so I think I dropped that particular ball.

Still, I hope you'll like the rest of the chapters. Ch. 4 has been approved and will be published tomorrow. Ch. 5 is pending approval.

sanser6sanser6over 8 years ago
You touch my heart

Sad story, beautifully written.

dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 years ago

abusive and controlling people should be taught a lesson that they would never forget. Good story and writing.

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