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Masterskitten26Masterskitten26almost 6 years ago
Great start!

look forward to more

nargatoulanargatoulaalmost 6 years ago
Nice

Very descriptive without being tiresome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very, very nice start but....

One tiny thing. Could you stop saying Daphne so much? ALL of us readers already know it’s Daphne. That’s who you were talking about and describing. Start using she and her because your overuse of her name is hella weird sounding when it’s read.

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Flowers for the Dead is complete <3 Thanks to everyone who has commented, rated, or added it to their favorites! *wlw non-human multi-chapter in the works **first time single-chapter piece in the works

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