All Comments on 'Fluctuations'

gave you a three, would have been a four but there was no ending. I need another chapter and fast. Thanks.

Very erotic and well written.

First admission...this is a straight couples-swap tale. Probably more accurate in Group Sex than LW, but WTF, not THAT far out-of-category. There is NO tension, from the first sentence, that two couples who are acquaintances, but not great friends, ARE going to get together and have a straight (M-F + M-F) swap. Despite that, it is SO well done that the reader is waiting for the next shoe (or garter belt) to drop as that reader is enjoying the state of current events!

Only quibble that was raised (by an earlier comment) which has some foundation is that the evening's activities have not completed at story's cessation. I considered that it was an OK place to end, since the rest would probably be repetitions or variations on the established theme. Any plot-surprises, such as overt lez-action, would be outside the established characterizations.

In short, vanilla...but Hagen-Daz French Vanilla Bean, NOT store-brand artificial-flavor sugar-free vanilla ice-milk! 5*

Maybe they have some new best friends unless John and Sarah's "dance card" is too full. I liked the fact that they did not head for a single or separate beds.

...and no further chapters. This is a good tale, well told. It is entirely believable. I hope you find the enthusiasm to write some more. I suspect many married couples have fantasies along these lines but are unsure of the long term consequences. The dialogue here is particularly good.

OH so good, lots of descriptions lots of good sex, felt this could be a report of a meeting of friends that has happened.