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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oooh!

Really lovely, though the end feels very rushed. I wish you had drawn it out longer with the same gorgeous detail of the paragraphs before. She's about to be impaled on a massive dildo and... it just drops right off. A frustrating cliffhanger, I want more detail!

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