All Comments on 'Flying the Coop Ch. 01'

I'll admit that I started with skepticism. But this story has the beginnings of being a truly great story. (Just don't drag out the timing on the subsequent chapters.....)

-- KVK

I want more of the story to decide whether i like it or not.

keep writing. I love the story

Good start, I'd read more. But who's Claire?

I decided after I'd already written this chapter that it might be confusing to have two characters with the same letter starting their names (Cooper and Claire), so I changed Claire to Sharon. Obviously, I missed one. Good catch!

...my score represents: "don't know at this point-could go either way" ...though i think you've got a story here, can't tell yet....so bring us some moist heat in your next chapter

I would like to read more chapters please! I would also like to read about how the affair started.

Please continue with this story. I really like it so far.

Obviously you are on to a good thing so keep it going. This theme should be developed.

It's very good so far. I say keep going :)

I can't wait to read your next installments!

I hope you're still writing the next chapter to this story.

Please continue, looking forward to finding out what happens next.