All Comments on 'Flying the Friendly Skies'

You all are hard-hitting this story simply due to the structure of spelling and grammar, as though that is all that makes a story. If you are so interested in having it proof-read and being all fixed up, then contact the writer and do it yourself. Don't just type it here.

Recently flew BA wish had read this before... Atleast i could have fantasised...

Good story that carried well. I enjoyed it.

The errors do keep readers from really getting into it though.