All Comments on 'Focus'

skill. Personally I enjoy the build up and the surrender of a story--I'm old enough to have given and received the various sex acts and have a good memory of them--I don't need someone elses version of the details. If I masturbate to a fantasy or while reading a story I usually orgasm at the first joining and quite often don't bother reading the details.

That's really good and would be worth another shoot maybe... Thanks

What a fantastic erotic story. Nice & slow seduction and with no contact just the situation being enough to get them both off, the build up and anticipation of what will happen was brilliantly done. Graphic sex stories can be great but this is so much more erotic. A part 2 where the contents of the stick and if they went to the next level would be awesome if you ever decided to do one but keep it tp this style. Excellent. 0DoL7"