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All Comments on 'Following Instructions'

by CanadianAngel835

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Sman4444Sman4444about 6 years ago
Fun Adventure!

Makes me want to think up some fun adventures too. Thanks for the ideas!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
There's a difference:

defiantly - definitely

to - too

wonder - wander

Frequent misuse of words spoils the enjoyment of reading a story. Could benefit from an editor.

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