by karynstaboo
This is a very hot and sexy tale. Whatever you do, don't stop now!
A delicious story that offered lots of future possibilities. I'm sorry you didn't do a follow up (or two, or three . . .). If you do another, I'd suggest you find an editor, who I'm sure could turn your story from hot to sizzling.
Needed a little more editing, but a very hot story none the less. I wish that you had written a sequel. If you have and just failed to link the two of them together, then I look forward to finding it!
very sexy story. could role play and seduce alot more though but it did the job here ;) x
another story where the sister is bi. so the brother can fuck a lots of pussy .