All Comments on 'For Old Time's Sake'

by TheMadSonneteer

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice little story

Easy to read and believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A few questions

Why have the spot-lit stool in this story? What does it add? It suggests to me that these two have, or had, a sub/dom type relationship. Now she is about to get married to someone else who is apparently unable to satisfy her sexually the way this guy can. So, a dilemma: the good provider or the good fuck? All in all, though, a good read and fairly believable, although both characters seem shallow and silly to me.

PolyLvrPolyLvralmost 9 years ago
Good stuff.

While I feel sorry for her fiance, it's better that she end it now. She came to the realization that Bryan understands her, deeply, better than anyone. And he has no apparent problem shifting into the mentality required to give her extreme sex.

Her hubby is a nice guy, a good guy. Probably a decent lover, too. But he likely cannot unleash himself with her like she needs.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 4 years ago
Amazing

So well written. 5 Stars!

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