All Comments on 'For One Night Only'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
much too short

This lovely romance should be expanded greatly. The story itself is well-written, although more time should have been taken to introduce the character and extend the buildup of the plot. The love scene, which is also rather brief, should also have been longer.

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