by leondreamer
Great job, very hot, very descriptive. I love it, can't wait to see more like this.
One of the best stories I have read here, the way you have structured the story and the little details you have put into it makes it a wonderful story. Looking forward to reading your other stories. It's great to see good aussie talent.
One of the best I have seen here. Well done, great writing, lovely theme. Just one tiny little 'problem' though.... 'ARSE'??? really??? why can't you Ausies and brits learn to say ASS like the rest of the civilized world!!! haha
An absolutely brilliant story!!
Slow, careful, and very affectionate - the way it's supposed to be.
Ignore the linguistic hicks around here and keep writing the way you do.
Good story that seems to have been unloved for 13yrs and that’s just not right or fair, tbh it was pretty much on point, no real faults, other than the cigarette thing, which tbh makes me feel quite queasy, please don’t include smoking in stories all you authors out there, it’s a real turn off for the rest of us. Cheers Ppfzz.