All Comments on 'For Someone'

Good character development for a short story, and very hot sex scene. Quite an enjoyable story!

like the previous person mentioned, very good character development in a short space..and the sex was extremely hot! i'd like to read more.

Hey Adam

Intense sex, would have liked a bit more foreplay!

Keep going though.

I wrote this one as a kinda example for a friend who wanted to see what I could do. It had to be short, concise, but overall, really steamy, and most of all, plausable. I read too much stuff on here that just causes me to sit back and think... Who does that? So yeah. Sorry it's a little to abrupt for you, but it wasn't really written for this site to begin with - I just thought I'd stick it up here.