All Comments on 'For The Want of a Key'

please don't make another story again.

Many here love this story and hope you continue to write.Just know the sick trolls that are here every day with their same old sick comments are just sick old fat ass men with no wife and no sex and nothing else to do.All five stars

Moron.Wrapping his genitals in a piece of plastic is erotic? Like I said FETISH.

You should have spent your time finishing your first story.

lame

cruel ass lying bitch 1 star

I also liked the story. In fact I look forward to your next one. This story could have been written about us. We do not do the cage thing but my wife's pet name for my penis is "poodle". When we go on vacation then to a bar she says lets go find a "shepherd" for me tonight. The part where the wife loves the husband is so true as much as the husband loves his wife. You nailed it!

1* for this garbage....the writer did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some kind of gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this pathetic story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, poor written and not enjoyable.

Hey ass wipe, did you just describe yourself? You must have to favor this shit. Sick fuck, got the balls to call out others. Fuck off moron.

The comments said it all. Only the sick perverts who climbed out of the slimy sewer would favor this garbage.

you read them all. YOU know you love all of these stories. You relive your married life when your wife fucked you over your entire marriage Then she died and you have to relive what she did to you day after day. We all hope you live long and think about that

In 20+ years of marriage we’ve never tried a cock cage. Patrick is bigger than ray, I wonder how it would go. I love a husband who shares. So, so,m

Wife getting thoroughly rodded out while husband doesn't even get sloppy seconds. He get to be miserable and gets satisfaction. He needs to pack up and leave soiled home

Do you read them whore? I bet you don't read a single story, since you never comment on one. It's always attacking others. Fuck off cunt, nobody gives a shit what you have to say. Go do what you do best, collect cream pies for your hubby. It's lunch time. Read the tags, sounds like just another piece of garbage thrown into this category to see if it sticks. Cock cage? Sounds like it belongs in fetish, put it there.

4 a ZERO

Absolute crap.

...."He'd often fantasised about seeing his wife get fucked by another man, with a large cock. After all, that was something he could never offer her, and he felt guilty about that!" The statement of a sick pervert! Its like the fantasy of a pubescent teen!!

a key controls lack of brains along with the fetishes, TK U MLJ LV NV

Ignore the trolls who read a 3-page story just to write how indignant they are that you sullied their internet.

Well written and HOT... Please keep writing!

Gosh, it couldn't be worst than that!......what waste of time!

The writer did a tremendous poor job in this ugly story. In fact it seems the author has some gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this pathetic story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, low context, shallow, pathetic, wimp, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

1* for this trash.

What garbage and waste of time reading this pathetic story.

No wondering this stupid story has such low score!

Please writer, stop writing this kind of trash......or move your pathetic stories to other session, like gay or fetish.

1* for this trash

It was meh until the cuckolding. Then it tanked.

Actually, this story was a good story.

It might have been a true story, and in its reality - it felt real!

GOOD JOB!

I don't understand someone letting themselves be fitted with a cock cage, also wanting another man fuck his wife with a big cock as once she has tried one she will go and find others whether he likes it or not and he'll be in the cage for life. All due to him having a pea sized brain in his cock end, his only escape will be divorce.

We get it. Some of you dislike cuckolding/enforced chastity stories. Since cuckold has been a word in the English language since at least the time of Shakespeare, maybe you should accept that it’s going to stick around. Until Literotica creates a cuckold story category, these stories will land in different categories. Get used to it. Read something you like and move past the stuff you don’t. You should have had an idea by the third or fourth paragraph of the story — if the title wasn’t enough of a clue — of the nature of the narrative, closed the story and moved on. As one to lived in chastity for a period of time in a loving relationship, I can tell you that these relationships exist. So suck up your verbal drivel, pull up your big boy pant (if you’re wearing any), be an adult and move on.

5 all the way! Great story, please ignore the haters!

Nothing Loving about deceipt, humiliation, and an unappreciative wife. One

In the early part there was an awful lot of “Ray’s wife”...said this or that. Very wooden. But early in page 2 there was some inspired writing,which described a close relationship,being tested,and meeting the test. I thought that this was very well done. I do hate the use of “Ass” and much prefer the British “bum” or “bottom” when speaking politely and personally. Amy was a fine brave girl and not very nervous at all,and this seemed real,born out of a happy and trusting marriage. Consistencies in a story really do count and in this one several tight corners were taken with the partners staying in character. You really do have to wonder how the trolls could have ended up here,then stayed right to the end,everything was flagged for them,and,as one commentor said,there is no cuckold category. Jason was done well too. No belittling of Ray or over the top surprise,a man of the world who got treated and knew when to leave,but having left details. All good. The writer would do well to stay away from the style of “Ray’s wife said......Ray looked over,etc” When first names were dropped early on page 2 there was a step change in quality. We didn’t need the names,we knew who was who. I wish that he had been treated to the momentary terror of having filled his cage to bursting ( What now!!) He is to be congratulated in having a wife with such easy confidence,not afraid to go for it. It seems entirely believable that they will stay together. She will be more happy than otherwise in future,Ray too. I’m sure that there will be other adventures.Nice people. I would like it if Ray is let out of his cage and masturbated while hands tied. A reward for being so obedient and compliant. Only this one time,not in future.

cuckolding, wifesharing, humiliation and all similiar crap is a fetish.

Garbage. And those that don't like that, tough shit. Go whine away little girls, cry a fucking river, who the fuck cares. LMAO

This was a well thought out and very hot story. One of the best I have read for some time. I noticed how many people didn't like it but they are the self appointed story police who haven't a bloody clue about just minding their own life. The haters are likely the same people who love the stories about incest and such. Ignore them and keep writing what you like..

Ray should lick her pussy !

Although not big on the humiliation aspect, the story is, from personal experiences, very well portrayed... Nicely done and I hope there is a sequel.

Please ignore the clueless trolls; it is hard to fathom why they even bother reading these pages.

What can I say, yet another great story, you must ignore the ignorant trolls and carry on writing.

Looking forward to your next story!!

Your story catches the essence of the Swinging LIfestyle. The only difference now is the introduction of Chastity devices which are relatively new. Went through the same experiences as this couple and still married after 50 years. As others have said, ignore the naysayers. For the life of me I cannot understand why they read stories like this and then complain. Just close the story and go elsewhere.

A moron removes the cage without the key. It's a toy. He can also masturbate and ejaculate while wearing the cage. Don't write about things you don't understand. And his wife is a lying, cheating, manipulative cunt. She has no love or respect for her husband and is clearly demeaning, degrading and humiliating him for her own pleasure. Kick her to the curb and give her what she deserves - a divorce. And to make sure she gets nothing in the divorce? Go down to the police station, suffer some embarrassment and get them to remove the cage. Then have them arrest the stupid bitch. You do know it's illegal to lock someone in a cage right? Stupid story.

1 star

so now he has a whore for a wife get the key and get the hell out

It was a good story. The plot and the dialogue are plausible and realistic. Your grammar, sentence flow, and spelling make it easy to read. Please keep writing stories like this, and I guarantee I will keep reading them. Five star rating. Ignore the haters.

One good thing here is the author that he stopped writing, and deleted most of his stories.

This was a bad story, overall.

Over 4 as a score is utter BS

JJ

Like many people I have often wondered why some many people read well written stories like this then hate on them so badly. But reading some of the negative comments I just now realized something. I think the problem may be the term loving wives as a category. I think some people don't realize that on literotica it actually means wives that cheat, cuckold, etc. And to be honest it is a terrible name for that category but it is what it is. Anyway. This story is representative of a big fantasy of mine and it happens like it should. Well done 5 stars.

Liked it a lot. Women having control is fun to read about, even if scary to actually do.

NewNaughtyWriter: very well written story. Like some other readers, I'm not crazy about the humiliation aspect of some of these relationships. But, in the end, you made clear that the couple loved each other and that aspect was kind of a game. Hope you'll let us know what happened to Ray and Amy. Hope they have a happy life together.

Anonymous 12/06/19 (I think). Like you I have been curious as to why the critics read disclaimers, warnings that the story will be about wives that have sex outside their marriages with the suggestion that, if they do not enjoy the topic, they should go on to something else. The men that write the criticisms know what the "Loving Wives" category means. They don't care. They want to register their unreasonable and rude complaints. I used to think they were mentally ill. And they may be that, too. Why would anyone spend time reading stories on topics they hate just to make these disturbing and obnoxious complaints? It is irrational. Like you, I think I have a new explanation. I think that these men have been hurt by a wife or girlfriend that cheated on them or rejected them and they have never been able to man up, solve the problems they can, and move on with their lives. They are irritating, but they are really sad at the same time. They are weak individuals trying to act like tough men that are in control because they cannot face the real problem of solving life's problems.

AMAZING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Super hot!!! Congratulations!!!

Such a hot story...I definitely would love to experience the same scenario. Quite unexpected the key suddenly being found at the end and her reluctance to let her husband out...nice touch!!

A story of toxic feminism.

Good to read a story of a couple secure enough in their own relationship to risk smashing it all to pieces and remarkably stupid enough to turn fantasy into stark reality.

They may get away with it once, but Pandora's box is open and divorce nigh on certain.

Dishonesty will always be found out and any trust will be decimated. Words mean nothing, actions do. The height of stupidity to do this no matter how strong the urge and one-sided duplicitous actions usually only end one way.

My wife and I really enjoyed your story. It was well-written, flowed well, and was exciting. One point you nicely wove into your story was how much a caged husband gets a thrill out of his wife’s pleasure.

Since I have been caged, and she has the key, our sex life is all about her pleasure and my denial. And she even gets pleasure out of my denial! Now, I’m a real pussy licker. And as she has become more dominant, she loves to face-sit me to orgasm.

We loved the part in your story where the husband told his wife, "Honey, I want you to do it. You know I get a thrill out of your pleasure. What could be a bigger thrill than this? I want to watch you fuck him. I want to look into your eyes as he's pushing his big cock deep inside you. I want to see you cum."

Later one she told her husband, "You see that Ray? You see the size of that cock that he's going to fuck me with!"

That was a nice detail that reinforced hubby’s inadequacy. The ending was absolutely priceless; she had the key all the time!

ray wants to please Amy . horribly obvious she isn't interested in pleasing him. Not much happiness left in that marriage.

I thought Ray should of take advantage of Jason's large hard cock and suck & fuck it. I most certainly would of!! 😋

She lied, in my eyes she cheated on him.

I love this story so much. Thank you. xx

very well written, nicely developed plot. extremely exciting for those of us who like this. please keep writing. have Ray get involved.

I loved it, if I was a writer. Just my life would go here, my wife and I have did it , as a game, starting out with whips, and on my birthday asking for a cage, then I ask her if we could find a man , that I would like to be a sub, caged and horry. First she said no, I wouldn't drop it, then . One evening she said remember when I told you about one boyfriend that had a bigger dick then yours, well I saw he today. I told him I was married, I said. Let's do it. She said , he wonts to have coffee. Said I could bring you. I the. Said make for Friday, and I will put the cage on. Now and be horry by then, she said but you will be eating my pussy, Friday came work day over , getting ready she said you going with it on I see, I said have too. I mail the key. We went out . And she said I need something more then coffee, we meet up and was the grate night, I got to see his big dick . As wife said if doing this I would have to show my caged dick to him. After he fucked her again. I was told I should clean her pussy as a slave . I did as told. , it started one night and went 6 years. And I loved it, I was cleaning house rubbing her down . And musty cleaning her after a night , he now find someone. And we still together. Yes I love being in the cage. Thank you for a nice story I got to live it.

She's a lying bitch. There would be jail and then prison for both her and her lover. DNA is a cruel mistress. You left out the real ending.

Well that was in the wrong category. Not an ending, the cage is a toy he can remove at any time without the key (know your subject) and she's about to get the divorce she deserves. What a terrible woman.

I enjoyed this. They did too, that's the main thing.

Humiliation & denial turn Me on & My pet.

So I emailed him this to read & edge... No cumming

I also sent him a link to purchase a sleeve, a 9 inch black one, so he can surprise his wife. She'd like to be fucked by a Big Black Cock. My little guy (he actually has a beautiful cock, but I tease him) can show her he can be useful wearing this 'helper.'

Consensual cucking? On this website? Unbelievable!

Very good. And the fact that u managed to not let it devolve into illegal and inhuman abuse gives it an extra edge. 10/10

Hell no. She can go sit eith him. She can go hone with and move the f#$% in with him