All Comments on 'For the Whored: Stormwind Ch. 35'

So, who taught Cindy how to be a bad girl? Did the assassin have accomplices? Awaiting the reveal...

This is not the first hint that you've dropped about someone in SI:7 betraying Elunara. I don't want to ponder their identity too hard (and ruin the surprise), but I do suspect now that this person may have been trying to hurt Elunara for much longer that it might first appear. Excellent job with the clues. Also, TWINS! <3R

Thanks to you and your writing talents I am now severely spoiled. The quality and regularity of your work is wonderful. I will be sad when the story ends. I love the love that permeates the story.

I'm not sure if it's simply a matter of Literotica derping on the story formatting or not, but I've noticed for a long time that the majority of your scene changes are unmarked, and it's a tad jarring to read it like that. It's the only thing I have any complaints with. Perhaps you can write in a line of Xs or periods, etc, to mark your scene changes better?

I totally agree about the scene changes!!