All Comments on 'For What Its Worth'

Totally improbable, of course, but wow! Incredible emotional impact.

A story about a killer with a point to it. well done

too bad she didnt get to hear what he actually did and then tell him to keep killing the bad guys

It would have been better if this is a novel. But it's a great story nonetheless :)

i have a thing for anti-heroes, those who have become robots, do bad things and are for all intensive purposes lifeless. Not easy to write, given my own work, but great job. The odd one out finding a the last hint of life in a broken man, awesome. keep it up, and if you want to write more like these, i wouldn't be against it either.

What a pleasant surprise.

Well timed, well written and a 'different' ending.

(He reminded me of Callan).

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HP

one must always stay focused. TK U MLJ LV NV

Pompous, arrogant, incompetent.

1* !!

so fuck both of you two annonys asshole!!!

But be careful, Lit is monitored by an asylum for insane inspectors. And they can find you !

This shit of a story ? 1* for execution, 1* for writing skills (NONE) , 1* for dare to put this garbage to public. So fuck your brains Pommy halfwits.

Pretty good story, but such a predictable ending. Now had it turned out that

Donna was a hit man (hit woman, hit-chick, hit-er, take your pick), sent to

eliminate Mr. Grey, that would have made a better ending. In my opinion, at

least.

"Then he fed a cartridge of six rounds into the breech, placed the rifle across his lap and waited." No, he did not. Please learn something, anything, about firearms, if you're going to place them in a story.