All Comments on 'For You, My Love Pt. 01'

by Fallenfromgrace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Beautiful begining

Definitely a love story. The story has just enough of everything to make this a series that I know I'm going to enjoy ... strong developed characters, emotion and more than a little heat. I can't wait to see the next chapter .... :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sensuous & Arousing Beginning

Loved the emotional connection & the loving details (kissing the back, etc.). Unless you (the author) object to penetration with objects, would love to see you incorporate a strapon session into a future chapter. You have the skills to make it exciting, believable, and yet still loving rather than a (totally) dominant/submissive act. Regardless, I'm breathlessly looking forward to future installments!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very sexy

Loved it from start to end.You drew me in from the first word.Please say you will continue with this.I love your desription of things.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT HOT HOT

Wow FFG that was a great read. Got me in from start to finish ... wish I could have been there ;-)Will have to make the effort to look at the rest of your stuff now. :kiss:

mark197205mark197205over 17 years ago
Very..

very nice Gracie, will be watching Stephanie and Naina with interest....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Breathtaking

I know i've told you this on many an occasion - but I love it! Can't wait to read more m'love :) <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
From Raz

Overall, a very good effort, I particular liked the way you didn't rush the actual sex part. There was a beautiful buildup to it, which in some erotic stories can be rare.

Looking forward to Part 2!!

luv1luv1over 17 years ago
Nicely done

Loved the story. I love that you took your time to set the scene as well as the relationship between the two character. I like the pace too, nothing in the tale sounded forced or made like a bad gear change unlike I've read in some stories on lit. I enjoyed it very much, well done grace xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved It

A great effort, plenty of background information about the characters within the story.

More please!

ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
I'd give it a 6 if I could

From the very first paragraph I was captivated. This story has so much personality to it, which makes it quote memorable. It's quite teasing at first, but it uses the build-up to elaborate on the women's relationship. I really got a strong sense of them having great chemistry and a history together. The sex at the end is rewarding and just as well written as the rest of the story.

I would highly recommend this to anyone who is a fan of lesbian romance.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonover 17 years ago
Excellent!!

Very well done!! Well written, and good character development throughout with a eye for detail.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
~Beautiful Job~

Beautiful story Grace. I love the interaction between the characters as the story progesses. It really shows the passion and love they have for each other.

FatDinoFatDinoalmost 17 years ago
Where's your muse?

I want to kidnap it and make it my slave. J/k. Very nice story, Grace. Steamy sex, yet with so much passion no one can deny their love for each other. Well done!

BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
Awesome

You have to continue this ! I need to see have stephanie returns the favor

LacedUpLacedUpover 10 years ago
Please Continue!!

Ugh I love this!!! It's hard to find good interracial lesbian stories that aren't about one race dominating or controlling the other!!!!!! Really hope you find the motivation to continue this! :)

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