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SplendidSpunk about 13 years ago

Nicely Done

Your Romeo and Juliet, I like it. You do well to bring me up and I appreciate you very much. I'll look for more from you Dear!

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

5 stars

Good short story...

Anonymousabout 12 years ago

surpriseing

Well written and very exciting,And realistic,Love goes well when it is real. And you did a great job bringing it together. Includeing the ending.Suspense right to the end ,Will her father kill his daughter or not? Was she going to use pregnancey as an excuse to keep both alive.---- Thank You a 5 star fot sure

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