All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 01'

Bravo! A very evocative start, combining two very good themes. Where are you going to take it?

Interesting start to a story. I'm not that familiar with the mythology of a drow, but I pictured him being more arrogant. He seemed a little too polite. But hey, it's your story. Thanks for sharing!

I really ejoyed the stories, great setting, lots of possibilities and really arousing sex scenes. I would have liked to feel a little more affinity to the main characters though... maybe in the next edition? :) Love Gordon F.

I just wanted to tell you that this story is absolutely beautiful...your a great author...don't stop writing, as you have a great talent! ~Spirit Webb

I know its not something normally seen in bookmans, but it could be. If you fleshed out the pre-story part, I think its got real potential. Ive read quite a few books that got very racy and while this comes close to being simply "smut" its got real potential. Just a few encouraging words.