All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 03'

by FaeLina

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Keep upt the good work

This chapter is fantastic. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

Continue the great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow, wonderful!

Hot, keep these coming, I'd love to see them experiement with some things, I love Drow and elves, and you mix em up you have something really good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
this is really good!

i really liked this story, and your other one too, keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wonderful so far

i want to know what happens next..do they end up free ,safe, together and happy?please write more soon...

barepussloverbarepussloverover 16 years ago
Wonderful Story

You do have a flair for writing. Nice characer development. Wonderful love story.

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