All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 03'

The story was promising but now.. I'm not even going to touch upon the many stereotypes/ cliches. The biggest flaw I see is that there's so character development that would make the reader believe that chloe is in love with logan. Its just not believable

Though if she clearly thinks her son did wrong by Chloe, how/why did she bring up her son to behave so callously?