All Comments on 'Forbidden Ch. 04'

But too short!!!!!

I too wish the chapters were longer cause this is an amazing story. I saved the last two chapters to read as one.

Thank you.

I absolutely loveee this story! I keep checking back almost everyday for an update. Even though I wish the chapters are longer, i'll take what I can get. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Keep up the great work! :D

I keep waiting for you to write more, and I keep checking back... but you haven't continued the story! I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Where is the rest?Please continue this is a beautiful story.

hey write more...i've been waiting since april...i love this story n would like to read more of it.

the author's blog is listed in her biography on literotica. When I checked it out I saw a link to amazon http://www.amazon.com/FORBIDDEN-ebook/dp/B009Y7KY6K/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1363370352&sr=8-1&keywords=forbidden+by+amber+maynard

Does Harriet remind Ivar of his late wife, and is that why he cares for her? What will happen to the girl now that she's a captive? will she take up with Ivar? Please update story!

wait where is the rest of the strory I was just getting interested

When I looked at the date this was submitted (which was over a year ago) I was sad that there's no continuation to this story. It's so good and there's so much potential, I can't imagine how you could just stop.

I'm not going to demand anything of you, but it'd be a shame if you didn't finish this story.

More?? Is there going to be more?! Oh god I hope so! <3

Please tell me you are planning to finish this amazing story!!! I really hope you don’t take as long as other writers do to complete their writing.

Please finish this story!!