All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires Ch. 03'

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joodlejoodleabout 9 years ago
Thank God

Thank God you finished this. Wonderful story. I really appreciated the hot "sub" session near the end. And Mike. Without Mike, we wouldn't have gotten Alejo's reaction to Mike. Mmmmmm. Sometimes I think there is nothing sexier than a enraged man. But I suppose not just any man. Thank you for this story. Loves!

naughtyboy92naughtyboy92about 9 years ago
Incredible

such a great story! So glad you came back to finish it! The sub session was amazing, so well written and so hot! Although now I would like to see 'tormented' get finished! I want to know what happens with Lily and Ryan :) keep writing!

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