All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit'

Need the rest of the story.Good build up.

I look forward to reading your next posting

I'm looking forward to you building on this base

I really liked your story, the sensitive way you described Tim's feelings, his growing awareness of Nurah, and his concern about being a gentleman and showing the proper respect. You're painting an interesting picture of two realistic, likable characters.

Good character build-up - can't wait for the entire book! :)

I honestly enjoyed reading this...loved the build up and am anticipating the rest of the story ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter.

A good cross cultural interaction