by gimmesomesugar
Good start and I like where this is going. It has interracial elemebts along with taboo. Can't please everyone.
that was a clever writing I'm sure many were thinking a young white girl developing into a full grown woman was about to get a taste of an older and experienced big black...keep writing it's looking good..
I love constructive criticism. This is not misfiled...it's about a niece and her uncle, who happens to be African-American...as stated he married into their family; and their developing sexual attraction/acts. Leave many more even if you hate it!!! I've just started writing erotica!!!
good start, pay no mind to jackass commenter. They have no purpose.
This is misfiled--inter-racial is the category
Please ignore the ignorant comment from the previous idiot. These are people who can't write and just think it is clever to write harsh words.
I like the angle you are coming from and would encourage you to continue.
this is a good first story and being its ch.01 you have more to come. Continue writing