by Alex_Lockheed
It really fucking real story. You are a gifted writer. Keep it up
Terrific four-pager. Got me wet. Definitely need to read more.
xoxo,
Di
Lusciously and erotically well done! Waiting for where this one heads to in your next installment.
You are a great writer! I hope you will add more chapters to this one!
Please do continue. I very much enjoyed the lead up, the consummation and the initial aftermath. The sex was scorching hot and well worth the wait.
Hi omg your so gifted , please carry on show us where Lizzie and Mark will go . The two will become one and this love between them will blossom xxx
To be honest, as far as i know, this is the first of your stories that I have read. I haven't even checked your bio to see if there are other stories, but I will! This was a great story. Well written. Followed a good sequence. You wrote with feeling in your words. Not everyone may like your writing style, but I did. Hope there is a Chapter 2 to this story. This is the 1st story of this type that I have read. I found it pretty hot. Thanks for your efforts.
This storyline could go forward in so many directions. I would like to see you do that with more segments added to this beginning. Take care, be well & stay healthy.
That was simply amazing. A great combo of story, tease, and sex. I could see the screens in my mind's eye and I actually came very hard myself at the end. I want to see more. As a lover of sexy trans women, I say bravo. Waiting for more Lizzy.
You should do a bit more editing, though. Too many silly errors.
It seems like Lizzy and Mark are meant for each other,but Judy I take it has feelings for Mark also,but he likes Lizzy more.But from the authors POV Judy seems like a genetic girl,whereas Lizzy is a Hermaphrodite or Shemale who was born with a cock.
Sadly I wish Judy was one too,so Mark could have Sister Shemales to be with both and both wouldn't have to do without.I hope the author decides to do a part 2,and have either Judy be a closeted shemale or she has a medical problem where she turns into a girl with something extra,that would be sweet as hell.Later.
Yes. Great story and really good writing. Diff would like to read more in this series.
The first 10 comments Lit showed me all asked for more of this passionate story. I hope you will share more of this tale with us. So many ways it could go.
What a great character build up with great action. Please tell more of thier story!!!
I'm seeing comments over a year old and no part 2! Please put I'm us out of our misery
Like so many other stories on here, this isn't going to be finished, is it ?
So very disappointing............
Rapier
Loved it! Bravo! Quite well done! The storyline moved along at a good pace. Yet there was a nice bit of the emotional aspect, and suspense intertwined.
Excellent, needs another chapter or two. My special lady & i thinks she should be more submissive, mild masochism maybe. We enjoyed your story.
I truly enjoyed the story and want more. Good characters, excitement, drama and great sex. Yes more please.
Lovely storey, well written. loved Lizzy and Mark - you fleshed them out to the point where I really liked them as people. Though this was written some 3 years ago I would very much like to read more.
Thanks for your time and efforts writing these stories (loved Jenna as well). I get the impression that it takes a lot more time and effort than you would think to do this, particularly to this standard.